Sunday, December 25, 2011










The Last Bus
By
Samresh Kumar Shrivastava
Date-28/05/2011




FADE IN.
EXT.  A CROWDED BUS DEPOT-AFTERNOON
A man is standing and waiting for the bus. He seems to be an educated, urban professional, very well dressed, carrying a backpack and a few expensive looking gadgets like a cellphone, an ipod, a laptop etc. He is feeling out of place as he prefers air travel and is used to luxury. However, due to reasons unknown, his flight got cancelled and unfortunate events landed him at that bus stop. The other passersby are not very prosperous, in fact, they are very ordinary. He seems to be the odd one.
His phone rings. He picks it up.

MAN
Hey man! How are you? Yeah…actually rite now m stuck at some bus stop. Waiting for the bus but its taking a long time .don’t know what to do? it will take me another 2 hrs to reach the nearest hotel…yeah yeah…m planning to fly tomorrow now so you can plan the meeting tomorrow with the clients .I will be surely available… .Okay..bye…take care.

He hangs up and looks around. The scorching heat is making the wait worse. He starts searching for some shade to sit under.
All the people are busy, one way or another.
A vegetable vendor cries his wares. A paan wallah makes a paan. A bearded man smokes a bidi, sitting. A small, nude, kid runs about. A man in a police uniform reads the newspaper. An elderly man scratches his crotch. Two men talk among themselves, keeping a close eye on the man. A crippled beggar is trying to write something on a piece of trash.
The man finds a place to sit. He puts his backpack aside and drinks water from his bottle.
A person is sitting beside him. The man asks him
MAN
Hello…haan…bhaiya….yaha agli bus kitni der mei aati hai?
He does not respond, but simply stares blankly into the man's eyes. The man asks again.
MAN
Hain???yaha bus aati bhi hai ya naam ka bus depot hai ye.
He still does not reply. Suddenly the man hears a voice.
STRANGER
Behraa hai ye bechara….sun nahi sakta aur naahi bol sakta hai.
He turns around to see a bulky man standing in front of him.
MAN
Oh…I am sorry.accha aap kuch bta sakte hai bus ke timings ke bare mei?
STRANGER(giving a mischievous smile)
Arre…aa jayegi sir.Bas thodi der aur intezaar kar lijiye.
The stranger scratches his beard and departs. Not losing the man's gaze for a moment.
The man finds this person to be a little weird.
He sits back down and dials a number.
MAN
Hey sweetie!...how r u? kya kar rahi hai? I am dying to meet you….bahut yaad aa rahi hai teri…

A few people are constantly watching him while he talks on the phone. Their expressions are not easily discernible. They are standing all around him.
The crippled beggar is still trying to write something.
The STRANGER lights up a cigarette, standing a few meters away from the man. The man smiles, he is absorbed in his phone call.
As time passes, the crippled beggar begins walking towards the place where the guy is sitting and busy talking, with his beloved, over the phone. He is crawling and dragging himself on his crutches and gets very close. Suddenly, the man becomes aware of a presence and looks up to see the cripple's face mere inches from his own. His eyes peering into the man's. He is carrying a piece of paper. The man gives a start and holds up his phone for a moment to ask the beggar of his motives.

MAN
Kya chahiye bhaiya? khulla nahi hai mere pass abhi.
The beggar does not reply. He simply hands him the piece of paper and begins to leave.
This makes the man utterly confused. He unfolds the piece of paper and tries to read. It says:-

YESTERDAY IT WAS ME, TODAY IT IS YOU.
After reading the note he looks up to find the beggar going further away. The man is quite genuinely surprised and seeks a reason for the beggar's behavior. The beggar turns around, passes a mischievous smile and starts moving away again.
By now, the man seems to be very disturbed. He has no clue about what he should do next, how should he act? He follows the beggar and calls out to stop him.
MAN
Ye kya diya hai tune muje?kisne likha hai ye? Tell me goddamn it. What is this piece of shit?
The beggar would not talk. He simply puts a finger on his lips and stares at the man. He starts to leave again but this time the man tries to stop him forcefully.
Enter; a policeman.
POLICEMAN
Kya baat ho gayi sir ji?kyu is bhikari k muh lag rahe ho? (to the beggar)chal bay bhaag yaha se madarchod….

MAN
Sir ye dekhiye…isne pata nahi muje ye kya diya hai? (handing him the piece of paper)

POLICEMAN
Kya hai ye?(reads it)arre sir aap ye kin chakkro mei padh rahe ho.chalo mere sath,aapko aapki bus tak chodd deta hu…..yaha koi bus nahi aayegi.

MAN
Kya??yaha bus nahi ayegi?to fir kaha ayegi?(the guy is very tensed now)

POLICEMAN
Muje pata hai kaha ayegi aapki bus….chalo mere sath.

The policeman makes a sign to the bulky STRANGER which the man had met previously and he comes over.
POLICEMAN
Zara sir ki help kar,inka samaan uthaane mei…inko bus pe chadaana hai.
MAN
Nahi…main apna samaan khud hi uthaa lunga.
POLICEMAN
Jaisi aapki marzi sir….
The MAN starts walking with the POLICEMAN and the STRANGER.
2-3 men also start following them. The crippled beggar watches them go into a dimly lighted gully.

Darkness and a lot of heartrending sounds follow. A lot of screaming and shouting as if someone is being tortured.
A bearded man wearing a black bandana and bloodshot eyes appears, waving a knife. This disturbed man is part of a group called “KRUUR SENA”. They are a lot of frustrated men who are not able to succeed in their lives. They have never tasted success and can’t bear to think that there are others who do. They simply hate people who are happy with their lives. Any smiling face hurts them. Their mission is to eradicate happiness and make the human race miserable.
                                                                                                                                                               FADE OUT


FADE IN
EXT.  SAME CROWDED BUS DEPOT-AFTERNOON
A family is waiting at the bus stop. Man, woman and a kid. They are talking among themselves and seem to be quite content.
A few meters away a grotesque man can be seen sitting. He has lost one of his arms and a leg. He is partially blind. His skin seems burnt, bearing many scars. Slowly, he moves towards the family and gives the man a piece of paper and smiles mischievously. The man reads the paper. It says

THE END

The man watches him go away. After a few paces, he stops and turns backs. He is none other than the young MAN we saw waiting, once, for the bus that never came.
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Friday, August 26, 2011

Sweet Frog and Ugly Flowers


The following writeup(i really dunno wat to call this) is Ridiculously Unreasonable so if you are here,looking for some logic in this then stop right there and move to something useful that can actually help you raise your i.q's & e.q's ...this ain't gonna help u in any ways but yes, if you feed upon a term called Absurdity than carry on...you might end up giving it some new dimensions through your share of madness...!

this was a dream,i had few days back...vivid,psychedelic and in technicolor..!

It all starts with...
A dusty room...An ancient bed and A noisy fan...
The shoot is about to begin...A bare chested guy sitting on the bed...sweat and anticipation both dripping down on his face.People call him Salman.He works on a daily wages in a brick factory but his heart lies in acting.His passion.
Two men standing few feet apart,one carrying a handycam and other carrying some bunch of papers.They were about to shoot some crucial sequence of some film but stucked in between.Heavy discussion is going on.Closer look shows that one is pissed off and another one is trying to do nothing.

The scene thay had in mind is of a Wedding night...

so what they have been waiting for?is everything not in place....are they missing something?

yes...the bed was without any rosepetals..

DAMN...that sounds dangerous.

yes...and it's just the beginning.

Over to the Directors.

Director 1:-(agitated)Where are the fuckin rosepetals?

Director 2:-(calm)listen dude..we are not making any shoddy b-grade bollywood film...you forgot??we are the comrades who have devoted there whole life to cinematic revolution.We are the real deal man...

1:-don't feed me this crap...i ain't shooting without any rosepetals...i need them now or i leave.

2:-look at this poor guy...he has been waiting since morning like this...sitting half naked under this retired fan....have some mercy on him..

1:-no dude...i can't do injustice to the learnings of my teachers...actually you are not getting into the aesthetic of cinema.You still unknown with its divine power.I am trying to create something exceptional here....something historical.Somethings are to be done just for the sake of arts and you seriously need to appreciate that...so please ask Sanju Singh to get the rosepetals from anywhere,anyhow.

2:-Sanju singh is not here.He has gone to find the gal for salman for this scene?If i am not wrong,You must be knowing that without the gal we can't shoot this particular scene.

1:-...and how he has planned to do that?

2:-I s'pos that won't be a big task for him as he is riding his magical pig who can make any gal mad just by his melodious grunts .
"oink oink".

1:-so u mean to say that he & his pig are part of some delhi eveteasing group?just that he is riding a pig in place of fancy bikes..

2:-no ..no...don't take it otherwise.Sanju singh is a pure hearted guy.He is also one of the comrade.It's just that his style of approach is little unconventional.

1:-Okay leave that...i think we have very little time in our hand so we need to rap up this sequence today at any cost.Let me think what i can do regarding the rosepetals thingie.(thinks) There used to be some wild red flowers in my backyard...let's see if we can find them.

2:-but i think you were specifically looking for "rosepetals"...will any wild flower will do now?

1:-yes i was but now i don't have any other resort...we have to do some exceptional lightning to make them look like roses.

2:-huhuhuhuhuhu!!!

1:-Laugh...laugh...as much as you can.This will take you no where.A time will come when i will rule this magical world of cinema then only you will realise my true potential.

Both the directors go into the backyard meanwhile Salman scratches his head.

Scene of the Backyard...

1:-There they are...My beautiful saviours...Let me get them and make them immortal through my sensational photography.

2:-hmmm...but they look ugly..

1:-What you know about beauty and arts?just stand right here & wait,i must get them ...

2:-okay...but be careful,i have read somewhere that such wild flowers are carnivorous.

1:-duh...that's what i call side effects of watching too much discovery channel..You keep drowning in your outrageous theories ,i will be back in a moment or two.

While he was busy in plucking the wild flowers,a frog comes into the picture.

2:-I can see a big fat frog croaking behind you.He is staring you like he has some serious issues with you.

1:-Where??(looks behind)oh...!thats not a frog...that is my asshole cousin pagal pandat...I caught him red handed stealing money frm his mothers purse.Therefore,she cursed him and here he is turned into such a lovey-dovey creature."croak croak"...Go away you prick...eat some insects.

2:-oh..wats happening there...pagal pandat is reaching for you...he just hurled out his long sticky tongue..watch out for him!!!

1:-shut up yaa...let me get this flowers first ,i can't stand much here..and what you saying ....he can never attack me,he is a big time looser.

2:-I am not lying... there goes his tongue...he is about to catch you.

1:-don't you have something gud to say..if not then shut the fuk up...let me do my work.AARRRRRGGHHHH...AAAHHHHHH
wats that sticky thing on my back...oh shit!!!....It's the frog....its his tongue....oh no!!!!!!Gross....help me dude...he is pulling me towards him.

2:-yeah i can see that and now only you believe me.

1:-yeah..yeah...m sorry for that...do something bro....he is wrapping me up....m feeling helpless...

2:-..oye...hat hat pagal pandat..let go my friend,u stupid reptile....oh christ!!!he is getting bigger & bigger...just like some mutant ninja turtles...

1:-c'mon dude...do sumthing..hit him with a stick or a stone..save ME!!!

2:-oh..i cant...m stucked..i cant move...u urself has to do sumthing...

1:-thats not fair....u r not even trying to move...c'mon hold me ..pull me towards urself....we dont have much time now...aaaahhhhh!

2:-i am trying yar...it just not happening ...okay fast tell me any message u want me to tell to your family...i will surely convey to them.

1:-you scoundrel...do sumthing....m gonna get u for this...

The frog wraps its prey and throws him right into his dark throat and eventually dumping him into his large ball shape belly.


2:-hellooo...hellooo..can u hear me?are u still alive?

1:-ohhh..aahhh...oooo...aaaaeeeee....I am inside...its too hot here...and once m out,that will be your last day.

2:-c'mon dude...we are childhood friends....

1:-kiss my ass you bugger..

2:-so shall i rap up the shoot for today?

1:-oh man...its so stinky here...this idiot seems to be eating all kind of crap....hey i found my lost shoe..

2:-wow!thats great for you....see if you can find my lost underpants as well....I will be thankful to you.

1:-STOP THIS BULLSHIT & ASK SOMEONE TO HELP ME,YOU MORON!!!

2:-okay...okay...i will see what i can find out but for the time being,I have got an idea.If somehow I make this Pagal panthat to eat this camera then you can start shooting inside.It will be a historical footage...first of its kind....never happened before.You will be a named as the greatest revolutionary in the world of cinema.

No response

2:-hey what you say???are you listening to me???are you there???

No response

I think you have gone for a nap or something.I can understand,this was really an action packed day for you...okay then,i will take a leave and will see you in the evening.Till then sleep tight.
CUT!!!


Pagal pandat is croaking continously to attract some females frogs.


Sanju singh is still in search of a gal.His pig has ran away.


Salman is sleeping...alone on the bed.


Director 2 has left to watch Tees Maar Khan


Somewhere down the belly of pagal pandat,Director 1 is in search of some papers so that he can jot down his Vulnerable experience and later on make a offbeat film based upon it.

PACK UP!